New Creation

Here is the beginning of a song I am writing. I would love help with anything, including music. Ideas and suggestions would be great

Verse 1

I want to give you my soul,

but I don't know how.

I want to give you my heart,

but I gave it away.*

Chorus

So take me as I am, all these broken pieces.

Please take all I am, all these scattered parts.

Please take this broken man, reforge him in your fire.

So I may be yours once again

Verse 2

I want to give you my life,

but it's all I have.

I want to give you my mind,

but it's covered in grime.

Bridge

I have fallen back so many times on my old addictions.

I have worshiped everything but you.

So let me come to you and be made a new creation.**

Alt Chorus

You took me as I am, fixed all my broken pieces.

You took all I am, gathered all my parts.

You took the broken man, reforged him in your fire.

Now I am yours once again.

*Could possible be "but it's already gone"

**I feel like this needs another line before going into the chorus but I can't think of anything.